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Nessie's avatar

This was so soft and earnest and gentle. 🥹 Moments don't last long but they carry so much within them, and I love the way this moves...crying, laughing, aching, opening, smiling remembering, and back to crying...and it all happens at once.😌 Love the imagery here.

Also-magpie! 😍

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

I loved the way everything moves through the poem without staying. The raspberry, the bird, the eyes of a friend. Nothing remains, and yet something keeps opening.

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