A Poem about the two deaths
There’s something about the ‘years like water’ simile that sits so beautifully for me in the wider context of the piece. Great writing!
Thank you:) I appreciate you reading my work 🙏🏾
This is deep and intelligent writing. I’m looking forward to your next piece!
Thanks so much Hayden:) I appreciate your support! Glad you enjoyed this piece.
No problem!
The image of the last person still carrying us in their memory stayed with me. There’s something deeply human in that threshold.
Yes. How relationship and connection defines ‘us’ is so poignant. 🙏🏾
There’s something about the ‘years like water’ simile that sits so beautifully for me in the wider context of the piece. Great writing!
Thank you:) I appreciate you reading my work 🙏🏾
This is deep and intelligent writing. I’m looking forward to your next piece!
Thanks so much Hayden:) I appreciate your support! Glad you enjoyed this piece.
No problem!
The image of the last person still carrying us in their memory stayed with me. There’s something deeply human in that threshold.
Yes. How relationship and connection defines ‘us’ is so poignant. 🙏🏾